Eve the shy Surskit [OUTSKIRT, Orre]

Text Color - #00dd00
Item - none
Gender - Female
Age - Child, 6
Species - Surskit, Pond Skater Pokemon, #283
Height - 1'08"
Weight - 3.7 lbs.
Pokedex Entry - They gatheron puddles after evening downpours, gliding across the surface of water as if sliding. It secretes honey with a sweet aroma from its head.
Level - 9
Ability - Swift Swim
Nature - Careful
Characteristic - Quick to Flee
Moves
- Bubble (level)
- Signal Beam (father)
- Quick Attack (level)
History - When Eve was born the first thing she saw was her older brother waking her up in the middle of the night, Bra ter? Wha ron? Her brother lifted her up and slid across the lake which she was born next to, and a scary Tentacool jumped out at them, but before Eve could scream her brother hit it into the water, with what to Eve looked like a rainbow. Once they crossed the lake her brother wouldn't stop sliding across the damp concrete. Once she turned 4 her brother taught her self defense also Don't fight to fight, only fight to protect yourself. If you fight for no reason you will make enemies and you don't want enemies. So Eve went on to being kind and gentle to her friends and her brother, she didn't figure out about the outbreak untill she was 9 years old but then she was safe in a forest just outside the Orre region. She thaught she wouldn't be in danger.... Untill now.
Appearance - Looks like a normal Surskit.
Personality - She never fights, never disagrees, or back-talks. She is the kindest Pokemon you will ever meet. She will care for you until you are either safe or healthy.

User Notes - Her Father was a Venomoth so thats how she knows Signal Beam.

Just so you know, you need to label all your moves, not just the ones coming from breeding. ^^; You can label the ones learned via level up as [Learned] or [Level Up].
Also, for a 10-year old who never really battled her level is a bit high. I think the acceptable level would be around 1-15 or so. VwV

Lulu is correct; and that level is especially too high. Even 15 would be pushing it with no battle experiance.

I will change that

If she's 6 years old then her level has to be even lower, most likely no higher than 10.
And you still need to label the moves. ^^;

Father must be stated in User Notes to denote lineage of egg moves.

Her level is also fairly high for one so young. Lulu is right and I would cap her at level 10 with her age and history.

Please revise.

It has been a month without activity, Moved to the Inactive Section.

Im not really sure...i dont think Mewtwo ever approved This character.

No, this character has not been approved yet. Mewtwo gave a few points that need to be fixed before approval.

Once those have been changed/elaborated upon, you simply need to leave a reply that you have made the changes in order for Mewtwo to give the character a second look.

oh ok thank you Ho-oh. Much appreciated.

Ready for approval!

I would like to use my second living ticket for this character.

As I stated on your other profile, do not pester for approval.
Posting multiple times that you want to approve something is harassment.

Approved.

Please move back to PC until Ho-oh choses a team for this character. Thank you.

Let's throw this girl into the OUTSKIRT Team, Orre.

:D Another one for the Outskirts!