Lucky the Brave Eevee [Cerulean, Kanto]

Text Color- #604e82

Item- None

Gender- Male

Age- 15

Species- # 133, Eevee, The Evolution Pokemon

Height- 1'00"

Weight- 14.3 lbs

Level- 29

Pokédex Entry- Its irregularly configured DNA is affected by its surroundings. It evolves if its environment changes (Soul Silver)

Ability- Adaptability

Nature- Brave

Characteristic- Proud of his Power

Moves-
Work Up (TM)
Quick Attack
Bite
Retaliate (TM)

History- When lucky was born he was given to a trainer. The trainer could be mean at times, but he also had a nice side to him. Lucky and his trainer traveled around Kanto and Johto, exploring and meeting new people and Pokemon. Once the trainer had gotten Lucky strong enough to start taking on the gym leaders the trainer had found a Tauros that was even stronger. The trainer had made Lucky fight the Tauros many times, although the outcome was always the same. Lucky had always lost to the blasted bull Pokemon. When it came time to choose between Lucky and the Tauros, the trainer choose the Tauros and stored Lucky away in the PC.

Lucky spent month after month waiting for his trainer to come and get him so it could be like old times again. One day Lucky was taken out of the PC and sent out of his ball. He stretched and yawned and looked to his trainer with distaste. Lucky heard screams and saw dots of blood all over the glass at the Pokecenter. He looked to his trainer in panic and confusion. Lucky's trainer picked him up and threw out the Tauros. He yelled for the Tauros to keep anything from getting through the doors. Lucky looked at the Bull, it looked stronger than he remembered. As the rampaging pokemon crushed the glass doors the Tauros used its last line of defense, Hyper Beam. The Tauros was left shaking and unable to move. Lucky and his trainer fled out through the back of the Pokemon Center as the Tauros tried to escape. Lucky was confused and had no idea what was happening. The Tauros caught up to the trainer and Lucky. There were a pack of things that scrambled towards them, they were all bloody and some missing limbs. Lucky tried to squirm free but his trainer only held on tighter and started to run.

The trainer stopped for the night in a house with a few other people. In the middle of the night Lucky ran away and tried to figure out what was going on. All of the living Pokemon luck came met all said it was some kind of epidemic, all Pokemon could be infected, the Ghost Pokemon only dissipated. No one was safe.

Appearance- He looks like a normal Eevee

Personality- Brave, strong willed, and very determined.

User Notes- Lucky is trying not to evolve because he is trying to prove to himself he is stronger than his owners Tauros.
Lucky would prefer to evolve into a Umbreon or a Flareon.
Lucky would never back down from a Challenge.

Species section needs to read (#Pokemon/Pokemon/Pokemon Species). Check a few other profiles for examples if you need them.

My only other note is that you need at least two paragraphs to have a working history, right now you just have one really giant one. Try breaking it up a little.

Revise and then I will look again for approval.

Ok I fixed the Dex entry and I separated the paragraphs.

Approved.