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Death the Alolan Marowak (Floater)

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Death the Alolan Marowak (Floater)

Post by ShadowCharizard on Mon Nov 27, 2017 8:24 pm

Death

Item
None

Age
Adult

Level
68

Gender
Cisgender Male

Text color


Quote
"It is time for you to die."

Moves
Bone Club (Level up)
Bonemerang (Level up)
Shadow Bone (Level up)
Shadow Ball (TM Move)

Pokedex No.
#105 Marowak the Bone Keeper Pokemon

Pokedex Entry
Originally, it was weak and timid. After evolution, its temperament becomes violent, and it begins to wield bones as weapons. Sun


Height
3'05"

Weight
78.0 lbs

Ability
Cursed Body

Nature
Naughty

Characteristics
Mischievous

Personality
A purely evil Marowak that reaps those who gets in the way of his master's plans.

Death's murderous impulses is the grudge made real. His heart was full of hate and rage. He roams from battlefield to battlefield searching for anyone to reap. If any pokemon doesn't interest him in any way he'll brush them aside and gives them an one time warning to not interfere. His goals being to help Dracul in any way he sees fit, including killing anyone that is a thorn to Dracul's side.

Appearance
Slightly taller than a normal Marowak. The bone is modified to serve as his scythe.

History
Born in Alola, Death was pretty much like every other cubone. When he was caught be a trainer, he never really had much in the way of fighting. Each fight was either on a whim of luck or face rejection and less amount of food. One day his trainer had a change of heart and tried to be friendly. The Cubone however seen this as a fools attempt at hiding their feelings. Through his Childhood days, it was again on the whim of luck if he has a good day. As his luck was getting more and more greater, so was his relation with his trainer. What he was truly doing was holding his grudge against the abusive trainer. A grudge that would play out later in his life. The cubone's winning streak was increasing further and further with each battle. One pokemon had the nerve to even call him a spiteful imp because of the way he attacks.

Growing into his teen years, Death started growing more bitter from the bottled up grudge. Still waiting for the day to come he carries out his revenge upon his trainer. With each time they went to a different battlefield he only seemed eager to inflict pain on other pokemon. Eventually he evolved into a Marowak and with it his voice had became eerily spooky for the other pokemon. The battles had been fought and won. Any pokemon that was defeated feared the voice that they had heard. It was enough that the police had to do something due to the brutality that the Marowak had been inflicting. An order was made that the trainer forfeit his pokemon. After the order was made, the trainer decided to take Death with him to leave the islands in the middle of the night. With that decision made the trainer left with Death, never to return to Alola again. They moved to the Kanto Region in hopes to start a new life. Once they settled in the trainer had once more set out to get Death stronger even more.

Reaching Adulthood, the Marowak had no more love for his trainer. His grudge had shown signs of coming out. The battles became more and more tougher with Death nearly taking the life of one pokemon. The Trainer had realized that he shouldn't have Death battle anymore. Though he hasn't earned his nickname at that time he was spiteful. In his mind he wished that a horror would befall the world and make it so that he has a place in its glory. Eventually that day came. At the age of twenty eight, word was going around that there has been pokemon attacks on both human and pokemon alike in a swarm of rumors. As night fell. the trainer took Death's bone and modified it to be a weapon.

With the epidemic already set in motion the trainer had finished modifying the bone. He thought that it would be simple to leave his Marowak to die, but when he looked away to get the tape to make the handle, Death had ahold of his bone. The trainer was trying to warn him not to use it, but with the communicator reacting to Death's voice it was enough to send fear into the trainer. "It is time for you to die." The Marowak went through with his vengeance and kills his trainer without remorse. The undead show up ignoring Death and proceeds to feast on the trainer's body. Any living Pokemon that encountered the Marowak soon felt not just fear, but absolute terror. The ghost/fire type attacked one pokemon nearly killing it. This eventually earned him the namesake he truly deserved. The eerie fire that glows around the blade resembled that of the reaper himself and since then the name Death stuck with the Marowak.

Two years later, a fateful encounter had taken place. An undead Charizard had finished his latest victim and was preparing to leave. The Marowak came across this charizard hearing the same amount of hate in its heart and madness to do the bidding of some unknown entities. They lock eyes and without a doubt Dracul made his threat to Death. The Marowak chuckles with his eerie voice. "This world belongs to you." This ended up as the start of an alliance with the Marowak. Death hates his fellow living Pokemon and sees them as parasites. His move Bone Club being the most favorite way to finish off anyone who got in Dracul's way. Tossing his bone like a boomerang made it dangerous for anything in its path. He loves the Undead and with a passion. After hearing Dracul speak, Death had picked up some of the words he had used.

User notes
-Ally to the Undead Charizard Dracul
-Loves the undead despite being a living Marowak
-Inspired by Death from Castlevania
-Image by Fox


Last edited by ShadowCharizard on Fri Dec 15, 2017 1:12 pm; edited 4 times in total
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Re: Death the Alolan Marowak (Floater)

Post by ShadowCharizard on Wed Nov 29, 2017 6:20 pm

To the main PC please
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Re: Death the Alolan Marowak (Floater)

Post by Mewtwo on Fri Dec 15, 2017 9:25 am

Only a couple of notes:

After a small discussion it was agreed that in the character's history the Kahunas should not be part of it. This section of the history throws up some controversy as we have released the pokemon from the region but not Alola itself or its canons so therefore we cannot allow them to be directly involved in character histories for anything not actually canon.

You could say the police got involved, since there is a notable police presence in Alola, but specifically naming the Kahunas feels excessive when it seems all of them came together to make this decision. Even in game plot each Kahuna keeps to their island and didn't come together for the events of the game.

Paired with that there is also the issue of banishing a creature that dangerous. If a feral animal is attacking or killing anything the police/animal services don't simply tell the animal or its owner to leave they put down the animal. To leave Alola I would suggest something to the effect that they ran from the region when a police order was put up for the trainer to surrender the Marowak to be put down. They wouldn't have been given a choice in the matter of its fate, however, because the Pokemon is a danger to society.

Second item is that I noticed is something I have been mentioning to you in your rank review and that is developing the personality of your characters in profile. It seems you did so but added it at the end of the history for flavor. I feel that last paragraph of the history should really should be in the personality section as it is exactly what I'm looking for in a personality. His drives, his motives, what makes him tick, all of those are things that are personality not usually history or user notes.


Please revise and let me know when it is ready to review again.


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Re: Death the Alolan Marowak (Floater)

Post by ShadowCharizard on Fri Dec 15, 2017 1:12 pm

Okay Mewtwo, lets give this another go. Let me know if anything else needs to be looked at.
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Re: Death the Alolan Marowak (Floater)

Post by Mewtwo on Wed Jan 03, 2018 2:55 pm

Approved.


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