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Amitiel The Shiny Dragonair [Dragon Team]

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Amitiel The Shiny Dragonair [Dragon Team]

Post by Requiem on Mon Jul 14, 2014 9:40 pm











 

Amitiel (Pink)
Item Dark Sphere Collar with two Black Feathers, Gold etched rings as two gold hoop ear rings
Gender Cisgendered female
Age Adult
Species #148, Dragon Pokemon
Height 13'01"
Weight 36.4 lbs.
Pokédex Entry If its body takes on an aura, the weather changes instantly. It is said to live in seas and lakes.
Level 38
Ability Shed Skin
Nature Timid
Characteristic Often lost in thought
Moves - Extreme Speed (Breed)
- Twister (level)
- Thunder Wave (starting)
- Dragon Tail (level)
History Amitel was born to a pure dragon blood line. That of being the elite fours dragon master Lance's dragonite, and the blackthorn gym leaders Clair Dragonair's. This allowed the rare move Extreme speed to be learned. When Clair found that this one dratini had learned this move, she wanted it in her team to help make her team stronger. The dragon elder thought otherwise, and took the baby into his care for the right trainer who cares for their pokemon. And to prove it in a quiz in the dragons den behind the gym once Clair was defeated. 

Then the epidemic hit the area, and the humans fled and left the dratini to fend for it's self with in the protection of the dragons den. But They didn't leave her with nothing, The wise dragon elder knew that she would need help in the tough years to come. The elder had priced her ear with gold rings to mark her for when the humans returned. He also left her a dark sphere when she was ready to take the next step, within the temple. 

Amitiel quickly learned the need to survive on her own, she battled the pokemon within the den getting stronger doing so before infected invaded into the dragons den. The pokemon that were there as well as herself defeated and killed the infected as they tried to pour into the cave. Soon the dratini grew strong enough to grow into a dragonair. She does not resent the humans for leaving her there, she feels like she wouldn't have willingly left on her own if she had the choice to make herself.

Amitiel spends most of her time in the water or resting on what is left of the old temple stairs, though never entered it. Knowing that she wasn't ready for what lays inside it, and respects the dragon elders last wish for her. She thought about the human that used to take care of her when she was only a small child, and that of her parents hearing from other pokemon that they were powerful dragons. Amitiel wants to become like them one day, but she as long since accepted that dream will never come true with the nightmares that lay outside the cave. 

But when a very powerful ice type pokemon was seen with in the den killing anything and anyone it came across, the remaining few survivors fled. Amitiel, not wanting to leave the treasure inside the temple broke her only promise to the dragon elder. She entered the temple, and took the strange dark orb from it's resting place.And two large silver rings with etching carved into the silver of dragon battles connected by a silver chain. Amitiel herself then left the den, her world and everything she knew into the end of the world. She was shocked at the horrific view that lay out in front of her, death was every where.

She found herself drawn to the gym, the main large building that she could see in front of the Den. Where her parents would have trained and battled other trainers, Maybe there were other dragon types out there. Amitel made a new promise to her master, she found find others and take back the dragons Den from the foul creatures that lay with in. 
Appearance Dragonair is a long, serpentine Pokémon covered in blue scales along its back and a bright white underside. Its violet eyes are dark and glossy. It has a smooth, rounded snout and a small horn in the middle of its forehead. Its head is flanked by two stylized wings, each white and curving into a swirl. It has distinct blue orbs on its lower neck and near the tip of its tail.

Amitiel is A shiny pink dragonair, normal in size and weight. Her winged ears are slightly larger then normal as well as her horn being longer and slightly upward bent. She also wears her dark sphere around her long neck just under the neck jewel, attached to the collar of the sphere is two large black feathers. Near the end of her tail just above the tail orbs she wears the silver etched rings with a small chain connecting the two rings on the underside of the tail. Amitiel usually has her ears half open, and her tail held high.
Personality -She is fairly quiet and often does what she is told if she feels it's right. 
-Ami is also shy when it comes to groups of pokemon doubly so with other females. 
-She is very calm and level headed as well and is very hard to anger but when she gets angry she scares herself what she might do. 
-Ami often tries to look for the good in anyone before she sees the bad.
User Notes - Being a lesbian she's not open about it.
- she tries to keep everyone calm when people start to fight
-She might watch females even when they are not looking. 
- She is always looking at the gold etched rings attached to the end of her tail just above the orbs.

Thanks to Happy Lunatic For Image


Last edited by Requiem on Fri Apr 10, 2015 2:19 pm; edited 26 times in total
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Re: Amitiel The Shiny Dragonair [Dragon Team]

Post by Mew on Sun Jul 27, 2014 3:45 pm

My Review:
Spoiler:


Moveset and level check out fine.

You misspelled "Dratini" consistently through the profile.

"When Clair found that this one dritini she wanted it in her team to help make her team stronger,"
When Clair found that this one Dratini did/had what? There's no subject to this sentence, and I'm not sure what you're trying to say.

"for the right trainer who cares for their pokemon and prove it in a quiz in the dragons den behind the gym. "
Same here, I'm not quite sure what you're trying to say. Was he holding it as a reward for those who can pass the Dragon's Quiz?

"She does not recent the humans"
Should be resent - Small thing though, I know what you meant.

The history on the whole, I feel, needs to be reworked. The basic concept and story is there, and the character comes together nicely... but the writing is clunky, and hard to follow.
Make these changes and it'll be good to approve.


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Re: Amitiel The Shiny Dragonair [Dragon Team]

Post by Requiem on Sun Oct 05, 2014 12:12 pm

Would like to Activate this Character please, as A floater Till Dragon team starts where she will be placed to stay.
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Re: Amitiel The Shiny Dragonair [Dragon Team]

Post by Mew on Sun Oct 05, 2014 12:27 pm

Profile Approved.


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